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I felt like writing last night, so I wrote last night! And I posted it! And this is my first time posting to AO3, so I'm super excited! And nervous! 

Title: Cleverer
Prompt: Bets & Wagers
Fandom: Firefly
Character/Pair: Jayne & Simon
Words: 2.4K
Rating: T
Summary: “I don’t believe in psychology. I believe in good moves.”
– Bobby Fischer
Warnings: None

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In your own space, share a favorite piece of original canon (a TV episode, a song, a favorite interview, a book, a scene from a movie, etc) and explain why you love it so much. Leave a comment in this post saying you did it. Include a link to your post if you feel comfortable doing so.

I'm just super, super enthralled by Firefly right now (and super, super late to this challenge but, you know, it's all good). It's tragic—the show has been off the air for well over a decade now, going on two! Even though the movie wrapped everything up nicely—or, at least I thought it did—I still find myself craving new episodes. (New rule, Afi. Don't fall in love with a dead series [again]. You'll only break your heart.)

The scenes I'm really fond of, I can't seem to find in clip form on YouTube. Surprising, I found full length episodes posted? Which would have been great to know back when I was scouring the internet for episodes after they took the series off of Netflix, but I digress. Since this show is older, a lot of the content I'm finding for this show feels... dated. Fanvids, songfics, those complications where folks chop a bunch of scenes together and play some music overtop of it all. I have nothing against these medias at all, but they do feel like a slice of fandom past as I can't say the last time I've seen something similar in more contemporary fandoms—even if they exist, I don't think they're as common. A lot of the lingo I'm finding within the snippets of the fandom that I'm coming across feel dated as well, which is surprising to me? I never really considered that fandoms age, but they most CERTAINLY do. The age of lemons, limes, 'slash-fic', all feel like so long ago, and yet these terms are all alive and well within this bubble of time that is the height of the Firefly fandom circa 2003. (Fifteen years is a LONG time; I just hadn't realized just how long?)

 

Anyhow, let's look at my favorite scenes (that I could find).



I like this scene because I love River. She's grown on me SO much in these past few weeks! River is complicated and well-meaning and I feel like we really see her struggle as she fights against her mind and body and her struggle to return to her old self, if that's even possible. Because her character can be so weighed down in negativity and difficulty, I love that Firefly gives us scenes like this, where River is just as loopy and incoherent as ever, but you can just tell she's doing things with good intentions. Like, yes, ripping up Bibles is bad. But you know she's not doing it with any ill-intentions. 

And she's so intelligent! You can just see the gears in her mind spinning as she's thinking this all through, right down to her favoritism of prime numbers.




 

Another of my favorite scenes (and episodes!) is Our Mrs. Reynolds, particularly the early scenes in which Mal is first introduced to the idea of having accidentally married a girl one night at shindig. The reactions from everyone in the crew are absolutely priceless, and these three minutes alone show SO MUCH of each of the character's personalities. The teasing, the banter, the GLARES from Inara. This is another one of the more silly scenes, not as angsty or heart-wrenching as other moments in the series, but I love it just because everyone is just so... unique? Even without having seen any other episodes of the show, I feel that you get such a strong sense of who's who in this moment. The character relations in this show are so well thought-out, I swear, I couldn't love this series more if I tried. 

Also? Accidentally marrying Joan Harris from Mad Men? I love the actress here, and she does such a great job! 

 
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 Since Firefly has been so heavy on my mind these past few weeks—what, with the novel being out, and everything—I've been thinking a lot more on the use of language and how I'd like to incorporate language into my own verse. Language in Firefly isn't much more than a mix of two existing languages, English and Chinese, but the combination of the misceaallenous phrases and use of colloquialisms and 'accent' makes the language experience of Firefly super fun! 

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My main concern with my story is having too many languages. I'm up to about eight unique languages used by different groups across the six planets that Spheres is set in. The problem here being that these languages are entirely made up, but they're each based on existing languages. For example, I wanted the primary language, Muwe,  to be pretty simple, so I used Hawaiian as its base. The Hawaiian alphabet has only twelve letters, and I thought that something smaller would be helpful for me to write and for readers to, well, read. Another language, Bain, is based on French. As romantic as it sounds, it's a pain to pronounce some of the words even in my head without having to look at the pronunciation guides. Here are a few of my favorite Muwe words and phrases!

 MUWE ENGLISHNOTES
   
Manu'Love'When creating new languages, admittedly, this is the first word I test out to see if I like the way the language sounds. If the word for love ends up sounding crass or unappealing, the language doesn't work. Those are the the facts. 
Pumanu'Lover'

I love that the way to turn a noun into a profession is to add 'pu' to the front of it. It's easy to remember and to recognize. (Sort of like how a person who teaches is a teacher, a person who mumanu (verb form of 'love') is a pumanu).

 Puwuya 'Killer'Which makes wuya 'kill'. See how easy that is?
 Ochi 'Alcohol'Nothing too special about this one aside from the fact that I like the way it sounds. It's, like, cute? (Would alcoholic then be puochi, or pumuochi?) 
 Moki 'Fuck', or 'Screw'(We had to add some bad words to the list, come on.) Moki sounds like 'mochi', the Japanese rice cake desert. Mochi is cute, and tiny, and probably really tasty. Moki is an aggressive, vulgar word. It's cute even though it really isn't supposed to be. I'm sure I'll have fun with this one.
 
 
The novel, it's all going to be written in English with some phrases from some of these other languages peppered throughout, mostly in dialogue when people from different backgrounds interact with one another. Even looking at it all now, I realize that eight languages entirely separate languages is going to be a chore to keep up with and very complex & confusing to keep track of, which is why I really want to focus on one or two languages. 

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